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aapne jinhe kshanikayen kaha hai wastav mein unmen se pahli to kavita hai aur doora muktak hai. waise likha aapne bahut hi accha hai ye batane ke peeche maqsad hai ki aap aur accha likhen. meri baat ka bura mat maniyega.
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